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17 June 2008 @ 10:36 am
FIC: Gobsmacked [Life, Dani Reese/Charlie Crews]  
Hey, remember the three 'fics I'll never write about meme' Funny thing...

Title: Gobsmocked
Fandom: Life
Pairing: Crews/Reese
Rating: PG-13
Prompt: Charlie and Dani do second base
Disclaimer: Not mine, although I covet Reese's jacket. Also, Un-beta'd.



Charlie didn't know how it happened-- well, he did. They were on a stakeout, same old story, chapter and verse. Except he was in the car far longer than he liked and when he closed his eyes he was suddenly not there.

Darkness was darkness was darkness was--

"Crews, you alright?"

He opened his eyes and found Reese looking at him. Her eyebrows were knit together it took a moment for Charlie to place her expression: concerned, careful as if she expected he'd do something crazy like write on walls.

Charlie grinned, the wide grin that staved off further questions and usually earned him a huff of frustration, especially from Reese but that was 10 homicide cases ago. Reese was still watching him. "I'm going in."

"What?"

"He's been there a while, Reese, I'll slip in and get a look then I'm back here ten minutes tops." He removed his badge, clip and gun and was out the car before Reese could shut him down. He leaned down, grinned again. "And this time I really do mean, ten minutes."

He didn't wink this time, he felt if he did Reese would reach out and throttle him.

So he remembered that, his fuzzy logic, the how he got from Reese's quiet car to the thrumming, bouncing club-- the first time he visited a club he'd been overwhelmed by everything, the sound, the people casually jostling each other. He'd almost reached for his phone and called Constance until a redhead with a sultry wink changed his mind.

Charlie positioned himself where he could easily see both exits, a feat considering the number of people bumping around. It was easy to spot their latest suspect . All Charlie had to do was look at the most ostentatious, noisy crowd and he found his man. Vasquez. Arturo Vasquez migrated from Peru to Los Angeles four years ago, suspected ties to a drug cartel and current suspect in the murder of an 18 year old boy.

Vasquez sat at the center with women on either side, laughing and carousing.

His attention was momentarily diverted when two women made a beeline for him. "Hey, aren't you that Crews guy?"

Charlie glanced at Vasquez, still regaling his minions with some story and smiled. "Maybe."

"You are!" One of the girls, a blond, giggled. "I saw your picture on the TV! You're a lot prettier in person."

Someone occupied the stool to his right. "Thank you."

"Hey, want to join us?" The other girl, also blond but with streaks of purple in her hair, raised a bottle of champagne, "We could party..." Her smile promised other things besides champagne bottles.

His smile turned into a full fledged grin. "Maybe later."

"Are you sure?" She shook the bottle in front of his face, "It's going to be quite the party."

Charlie was tempted, very tempted but he let the moment go on a second longer, letting the temptation pass. "I'm sure."

The girls hooked arms, "We'll just be in the lounge if you change your mind." And then they sashayed away, Charlie grinned as he watched them walk away arm in arm.

"Anyone ever tell you, " the person beside him began, "you suck at undercover?"

He turned in surprise and delight, "Reese!"

She was facing away from him, looking at him through the mirror behind the bar, her hair was down and even though she still had her jacket on, she could have been any woman nursing a drink. Charlie glanced at the bar but she had her hands clasped together, like she didn't trust her hands if she let them go. Reese swiveled on her stool and looked at Charlie with an annoyed scowl. "Go on, shout it a little louder I don't think Vasquez heard you."

"Ten minutes isn't up yet, Reese--"

"--and you've managed to blow your cover in less time than that."

"Not really."

"Yes," Reese said, firm, "really."

Charlie thought about it.

"Have you looked around, Crews?" Reese asked, she leaned back against the bar, her hair brushed the bar. Charlie didn't often see his partner like this and it almost always startled him. Charlie followed her nod, some of the women near them were giving him a cursory once over. He couldn't help smile again. "In case you've forgotten, your name and picture was plastered everywhere not too long ago. That makes you a minor celebrity," the way she said the word told Charlie everything he needed to know about Reese's opinions on celebrities, "and you're a minor celebrity with a pile of money, meaning every gold digging, adventure seeking girl in the know would have your name tattooed on their brain. Meaning you and undercover? Suck."

"That's painful." Charlie remarked, "Tattooing your brain, tattoo on skin is painful enough. My--"

He never really finished his sentence, and this was where all the confusion sprang from. Maybe he should have been paying more attention, more present but he wasn't and the next thing he knew Reese grabbed the lapels of his suit, slid off from her stool and pulled them off to a corner, nearer to the exit.

"Shut-up." She growled.

He did but he tried to crane his head, trying to look for the reason of Reese's alarm.

"Oh, for --" Charlie never got a chance to look, he didn't even get a chance to think. There were a thousand things and nothing rushing through his head but mostly it all boiled down to sensation and surprise.

Reese was kissing him.

His mind whirled and snarled, if he thought about it at all, if he allowed the fleeting, stray thought to progress this far... it still wouldn't be anything like this.

Her lips were soft but in no means did that signify gentle. Even here, Reese dictated the pace, hands still curled around his lapel, drawing him closer and down. Charlie fumbled, unsure what to do but let instinct guide his arms, coming up and around, he wanted to pull her up to him but Reese made another sound, angry and it rumbled pleasantly against his mouth and it took another second before he realized Reese had growled at him again. He smiled against her mouth.

The hold on his lapels eased and Charlie could feel her hands slide over him, she was about to let go and Charlie decided he didn't want that, not yet and deepened the kiss. He could tell he surprised her. Her fingers flexed against his chest and he pulled her closer, hands flowing up to her hair. Her glorious, magnificent hair, tangling his fingers around each strand.

Cool, quick hands slipped up and under his shirt and he shivered when her cool hands slid up his chest, on his back and down to his belt, past it and--

Reese suddenly pushed him away.

He reeled back, dazed. The door to his left slammed shut but not before Charlie saw the last of Vasquez's posse vanish out the door. Reese flipped something in her hands and he blinked. "That's my phone."

"You don't say." Reese flipped his phone open and turned on the video function and there was Vasquez, on his phone, switching hands with something considerably illegal. "Now we got cause."

Her hands sliding up and down his chest, to his belt...

"You stole my phone." His voice sounded weird, choked and wondered at it.

"I borrowed it." She said tersely. Reese wouldn't look at him, was avoiding looking at him.

She rolled the rubber band off her wrist and collected her hair. Charlie had watched her do this a few times before and he was always fascinated with the process, with how efficient she pulled her hair back and managed to make it all disappear in a knot but now Charlie could remember the feel of her hair in his arms, in his hands. His fingers tingled with the remembered sensation. Sensation, his Zen tape said, was an important part of the human experience.

"Reese."

In a few seconds it was the same Detective Reese he's always known staring back at him. "C'mon, we got a suspect to apprehend."

"Reese." He repeated. She looked at him, or actually she looked past his head and in the dim lights it was hard to discern what her expression meant or if she had any beyond a scowl. "Can I get my phone back?"

She blinked at him then passed the phone to him and was, again, surprised when she took another thing out of her pocket. His badge. "Figured you'd need this."

"I kinda do." He agreed and clipped his badge on his belt.

"C'mon."

"Hey, Reese."

She had the door open and she rounded on him with a glare, "What?"

The light from the outside illuminated her face. The ever present frown, the fierce expression, Reese was undercover, she had a number of ways and strategies to keep from getting made--

"What Crews?" She snapped. "Clock's ticking."

"Nothing." He said, finally and walked past her into the night.

Vasquez and his posse were hanging around the sidewalk, waiting for the valet to appear with their car. Reese clipped on her badge and placed her hand on her holster. Charlie settled for taking out his cuffs. "Reese."

"Now what?"

One of Vasquez's friends decided to sing a rendition of 'Hey Jude' in Spanish. It wasn't bad. "Do you think I'm pretty?"

She halted to a stop and the expression on her face was priceless.

Charlie grinned. "C'mon, let's go fight crime."

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A/N: Apologies for the delay, I really am quite the slow writer. Also, I'm pretty crap at titles.
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rodlox[info]rodlox on June 17th, 2008 04:31 am (UTC)
if its possible to howl incoherently with laughter at the characters, that's what I'm doing.

because I loved this.

I think the word "mercurial" describes Dani very well - able to shift and adapt and change on a moment's notice - or less.

ps: you are not crap at anything, not even at titles.
Grimorie: Reese[info]grimorie on June 17th, 2008 11:43 am (UTC)
Thanks glad you enjoyed it. And I like that word, 'mercurial' it does describe Dani very well.
rodlox[info]rodlox on June 17th, 2008 04:31 am (UTC)
...because "gobsmacked" pretty accurately describes Crews' reaction.
mute_mime: Knife ReeseCrews[info]mute_mime on June 17th, 2008 06:35 am (UTC)
We got a stakeout. We got some bad guys. We got some Dani/Charlie kiss happening. We got Dani being awesome. We got Charlie totally off guard. It was pretty great in all! :)
Grimorie: team pwns you[info]grimorie on June 17th, 2008 11:50 am (UTC)
Thanks! Writing Dani being awesome is not a hardship at all!
Mayhem Parva: (intodelirium)  starbuck[info]raincitygirl on June 17th, 2008 07:02 am (UTC)
Sporfle!!!!!

I love Reese.
Grimorie: Reese[info]grimorie on June 17th, 2008 11:52 am (UTC)
Reese is love! Or maybe awesome wrapped in more violent, wee scowling awesomesauce.
Angel: female!antryg[info]mswyrr on June 17th, 2008 07:38 am (UTC)
Niiice! The way it plays out is so in character, I could totally something sexy and funny and them happening on the show if RR wanted to tease at the possibilities later on.

I love your description, and the dialogue is spot on.

Thank you. :)
Grimorie: in the sun[info]grimorie on June 17th, 2008 12:00 pm (UTC)
Thanks! I was pretty nervous about posting this since I wasn't certain how people would take it but I'm glad it worked for you:)
i love you, wang chung chung: life - damian - not your average rodd[info]piecesofalice on June 17th, 2008 08:25 am (UTC)
Eeee! I loved this - I'm such a sucker for undercover lovin', so you had me at hello. But Reese was perfect, and I loved the part where Charlie watched her pull up her hair - perfect.

LOVED IT!
Grimorie: beginning[info]grimorie on June 17th, 2008 12:13 pm (UTC)
Oh, wow. Thanks, your one of my favorite Life writers so this is really wow.

Hee. I love undercover too, I can't wait for Reese and Crews to have that inevitable undercover assignment.

I loved the part where Charlie watched her pull up her hair

In my head this totally happens a lot.
andrea[info]wickedandcruel on June 17th, 2008 03:53 pm (UTC)
EEEE *flails* i love this!

*is incoherent*
Grimorie: beginning[info]grimorie on June 18th, 2008 12:00 am (UTC)
*g* I'm glad to have elicited a flail!
Uther Pendragon's Loyal Wench: life armholding[info]firthgal on June 17th, 2008 04:38 pm (UTC)
OH MY GOD! OMG OMG OMG! THIS WAS SO INCREDIBLY PERFECT! LOVE LOVE LOVE! Especially the end where Charlie asks her if she thinks he's pretty. I laughed out loud. It was just so Charlie, and such a great, natural way for him to take the awkwardness out of the situation and let her know that he gets what happened and isn't looking for anything more if she doesn't want him to. Also, THAT KISS! OMG! So, so, so very hot and you described it perfectly, just the right mix of actions and feelings, and I adored the part where Reese starts to pull away, and then Charlie takes control and pulls her back to him, surprising the hell out of her. That was the moment when the kiss became real for them, and it was such a beautiful moment, and I love that we can tell that Dani is ruffled even though she doesn't really show it. And her brilliance with the cell phone was awesome. And I loved your Charlie voice. This was amazing, I loved it! THAT KISS, OMG!
Grimorie: team pwns you[info]grimorie on June 18th, 2008 12:03 am (UTC)
Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it! I was so unsure of getting Charlie's voice but I'm glad it rings true for you. And, yes, Dani pretends she was not affected but she really was.

And her brilliance with the cell phone was awesome.

Dani Reese = Awesome. True story. ;-)
adlervan[info]adlervan on June 17th, 2008 06:15 pm (UTC)
i loves me a stakeout/undercover story, that is for sure! i wonder if they'll ever go down (or get to go down) that road on the show... i hope so.

"Do you think I'm pretty?" Yes, yes I do.

that was really excellent. i liked her irritation at the end. and Crews was spot on! good work!
Grimorie: Reese[info]grimorie on June 18th, 2008 12:05 am (UTC)
Yay, thanks! And Dani irritated is her way of dealing (or not dealing). I love our detectives so much.
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respect R: life: stylized[info]annakovsky on June 17th, 2008 10:07 pm (UTC)
Oh man, what a great premise, and ahhhhhh. SO AWESOME.
Grimorie: Reese[info]grimorie on June 18th, 2008 12:08 am (UTC)
Thanks! Glad you liked it and wow, I really like your icon.
Rhapsody in Purple: gimmecoffee[info]fialka on June 17th, 2008 10:30 pm (UTC)
Oh, rofl. Really nice to come home to after a loooong day. Dani's just awesome like an awesome thing, in't she, and you capture them both perfectly here.
Grimorie: Reese[info]grimorie on June 18th, 2008 12:07 am (UTC)
Dani really is made of pure awesome and the ways she's so lowkey about it makes her even more awesome. Glad you liked it!
if i could, i'd punch you into paralysis!: [life] dani reese[info]grenadine on June 18th, 2008 01:11 am (UTC)
Oh, excellent!
Grimorie: Reese[info]grimorie on June 18th, 2008 02:32 am (UTC)
Thanks!
andrea[info]wickedandcruel on June 18th, 2008 02:27 am (UTC)
Grimorie: reese_angel[info]grimorie on June 18th, 2008 02:31 am (UTC)
OMG HOW CAN I HATE YOU? BUT AT THE SAME TIME I HATE MYSELF! I AM SELF DESTRUCTIVE IN MY SPOILER NEEDINESS, LIKE DANI!
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darling i'm drunk[info]sinandmisery on June 18th, 2008 01:15 pm (UTC)
LIFE FIC, OH HOW I'VE MISSED THEE!

thank you for this...i loved it!
Grimorie: Reese[info]grimorie on June 18th, 2008 01:42 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you loved it;)
Egeanin: Life - knife[info]egeanin on June 18th, 2008 02:32 pm (UTC)
Awesome! Love that Reese is so cavalier about the whole thing and Crews is completely gobsmacked. And in anouther life bad!Reese was totally a pick-pocket. :P
Grimorie: team pwns you[info]grimorie on June 19th, 2008 02:51 am (UTC)
And in anouther life bad!Reese was totally a pick-pocket. :P

Hah. To quote West Wing, the things Reese knows and Charlie doesn't know about Reese would stun a herd of bison. ;)
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A.j.: happy[info]aj on June 18th, 2008 03:32 pm (UTC)
AHAHAAHAHHA, awesome. Poor Charlie. You do NOT understand things, even if you're trying. At least he tries. Also, "Let's go fight crime." <3
Grimorie: beginning[info]grimorie on June 19th, 2008 02:50 am (UTC)
Hee. Thanks! It's a good thing he has Dani for a partner.
I am jam tart.: {tv; life}  zennish[info]oltha_heri on June 18th, 2008 04:58 pm (UTC)
I love this. It is so true too, Charlie is terrible at undercover. Also I could actually picture Reese doing this, and not thinking about talking about it at all.
Grimorie: beginning[info]grimorie on June 19th, 2008 02:48 am (UTC)
Charlie is terrible at undercover

He is! He really, really, really is! C'mon, he's doing surveillance and what does he use? His very flashy car! Oh, Charlie!

And it would be a cold day in hell the moment Charlie gets Dani to talk about the kiss.
Joey[info]wildwitchdoctor on June 18th, 2008 05:24 pm (UTC)
AAAAh! You did mine first! !!!!
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!

And awesome...awesome ...AWESOME!


So cool and so muah! muah! Muah!


ANd hot.
And....phew. I'm not coherent. So I'm going to read this again!

muah! For doing this one.


Another prompt? Third base?
Grimorie: team pwns you[info]grimorie on June 19th, 2008 02:46 am (UTC)
Re: AAAAh! You did mine first! !!!!
You're welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed it;)
patron saint of neglected female characters: partners-dani & charlie[info]rose_griffes on June 19th, 2008 01:14 am (UTC)
Aw, this was so much fun to read.
Grimorie: Reese[info]grimorie on June 19th, 2008 02:45 am (UTC)
Hee. Glad you liked it!
BlackSquirrel: Competance Makes Me Hot[info]blacksquirrel on June 19th, 2008 04:51 am (UTC)
Awesome! And probably not so different from something we may actually see on screen (if we're lucky)
Grimorie: in the sun[info]grimorie on June 20th, 2008 12:29 am (UTC)
Thanks!
A wretch like me: Life - Partners[info]scarletumbrella on June 19th, 2008 03:32 pm (UTC)
Hehe! Perfect ending, and just... aww! :D V. enjoyable.
Grimorie: team pwns you[info]grimorie on June 20th, 2008 12:30 am (UTC)
Hee. So glad you liked it!
tassosss[info]tassosss on June 21st, 2008 04:14 pm (UTC)
Awesome! I love Crews's last line. Of course he's pretty!
Grimorie: in the sun[info]grimorie on June 22nd, 2008 01:36 am (UTC)
Thanks! Although, I think Dani would rather shoot herself than admit it to Crews.
i am the very model of an aaron sorkin character: though they go mad they shall be sane[info]ainsley on June 23rd, 2008 04:28 pm (UTC)
Ooh! Charlie would suck at undercover, and be totally oblivious of that truth. Also, you give good Dani.
Grimorie: Reese[info]grimorie on June 24th, 2008 01:15 am (UTC)
He really, really would. He'd gladly stick out like a sore red thumb. And my love for Dani can't really be textually rendered.
15lbpurebunny[info]15lbpurebunny on June 27th, 2008 06:12 pm (UTC)
REALLY liked this.

I could actually kind of feel him thinking about her hair.

Very well done.
Grimorie: beginning[info]grimorie on June 28th, 2008 07:01 am (UTC)
Oh, I'm glad you liked it! I'm also very much looking forward to your next installment of your story:)
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Alethia: Life Partners[info]alethialia on July 5th, 2008 04:16 am (UTC)
Ooh, yay! Good Life fic. Much love for this. Thanks for sharing.
Grimorie: Reese[info]grimorie on July 5th, 2008 12:33 pm (UTC)
Thanks so glad you liked it!